How to write well

Adam writes:

How do I isolate the mechanics of writing and focus on each component one by one, thereby improving my writing? After further research, I have explored the potential answers to these questions. This article will outline the aspects of good writing namely clarity, cohesiveness, emphasis and conciseness.

I have made further pointers here:

I could read many books and understand the lectures, but give me a writing task?
Reading books on writing did nothing.
This article will outline the aspects of good writing namely clarity, cohesiveness, emphasis and conciseness.
1. Good writing is clear
2. Good writing is cohesive
3. Good writing has emphasis
4. Good writing is concise
Good writing is clear
Clear prose is one that a reader can understand.
So, what makes prose clear and good?
Clear prose is good when it tells a story.
A story has two components – characters and actions.
When your prose seems too complex, locate the cast of characters and their actions.
Since nominalisation is a noun, it does not carry the same weight to the prose like an action word.
Prose that contains a subject and a nominalisation lacks the element of a good story.
(2) also tells the readers a story.
There are clear subjects (we, committee) and the actions know, determine and allocate.
Good writing is cohesive
Prose that does this will have a consistent topic string, which will make it feels more focused and cohesive.
Prose that breaks this rule, such as an arduously long sentence usually does not focus on one topic.
The first paragraph has inconsistent topic strings, such as hotel, international dancing competition and people.
Furthermore, the characters do not have any actions attached to it, making the paragraph lacks a story.
The lack of story and the inconsistent topic strings make the paragraph confusing.
Compare this to the second paragraph, where it has only two topic strings, hotel and event.
The character, hotel has an action wanted.
The combination of a character and an action creates a story in the sentence.
Therefore, the second paragraph has a story and consistent topic strings.
Good writing has emphasis
Prose has a good emphasis when it ends itself well.
Most writers struggle to write well when the subjects use technical terms.
When you introduce complex information, design the sentence that it appears in, so that you can locate that term at the end.
When you end a sentence with a good emphasis, the readers know what to expect in the sentence.
A sentence that does not end with an emphasis, will feel monotonous.